The Hidding Place

This month was our summer holiday. Mom drove me to went to ucle Dot's house. Uncle dot is one of mom's old friend. Mom said that ucle Dot is a good man and gentle but he is a little sensitive when somebody tried to touched his things that he warned before. Uncle Dot is a single parents since his wife Mrs. pope die 15 yeas ago. After his wife death his act a little mysterious. His house is placed in the top of hill where nobody lives there excepted him. Uncle Dot didn't had a single neighboor at all.  As usual every sumer holiday my mom always board out us with her friends because she need went to another town to make living. My mother is single parents. My parents was getting divorce since 3 years ago. I remember when I was at the six grades my mom and dad often quarrel day after day, week after week, and month after month. finally thet decided to divorce. I'm Darlyn. I 'm the first child. I have a brother named Tom and a sister named Anabeth. Even though, she is the youngest. She is very wise and clam not like me and Tom the boys who always fight about anything. We are barely agreed about something however we are very loving each other. When we were almost arrive in the uncle Dot's house. His house seem to be very fearful. There is no neighboor around here. His house was isolated but is quite big like a castle.
"knock ... knock ... knock" our mother tried to knock the door.
shortly somebody open the door
" is Dot at home?" asking mom to a man. The man that we knew as uncle Dot's maid.
" Yes, he is ... and you're? ' asking the man
" I am Melinda". Said mom
" oohh Mrs. Melinda your presence had been awaited by Mr. Dot, Please come in ". Said the man
We are come in into the ucle dot's house. It seems very sacred like a movie. I imagine that if this house was like a hoes that I read in my story book. There are a lot of secret chamber which had a lot of secret alley into unimaginable place.
" ohh my dear, Melinda  ...." said uncle Dot.
" yes, Dot ... How are you? long time not see you " said mom.
While mom talking with ucle Dot we are waiting in the the next room accompanied by uncle Dot's son named Geranld and his Maid.
Geranld is a naughty boy who had a lot curiousity.
After mom talked with uncle Dot, she left and ordered us to be a good child while mom went off.
Uncle Dot took us into our room and he said do not play off with his stuff.
after his leaving we tried to take a rest.
I heard Tom's voice from a far.
" Darlyn ... Darlyn ... !!!''
I  went out to my room and tried to find Tom's voice.
Suddenly I head Tom's voice in a room which not to far from mine. When I came in, I didn't saw Tom. i just heard his voice. when I was looking for him, I heard his voice in the huge wadrobe and i tried to open it. I saw a square hole at the buttom of the wadrobe and there is a stair to under. I take tourch in my pocket ad came into it. This place is very dark and a lot of alley. I saw another light in the corner and I ran came to it. I saw Tom.
" Darlyn ... Darlyn ... over here ... I want to show you something! follow me ! " said Tom
" what happen Tom? why you got here? what are you doing? you know that if uncle Dot's knew that we  were in here. We would get trouble."
" no he would not if he didn't know, just follow me and don't to much to talk, just follow me. you would be shocked with something that would be you seen."
 Tom made me curious and I decided to follow him.
" ahhh ..... "
I couldn't believe my self about something that had I seen.
" Tom, is that a dream? How can a lot of gold bars under here!!." I still didn't believe
suddenly somebody came
" I heard somebody was walking here!" said Tom
" Let's find the hiiding place.'
Tom and I ran away
other guy had looked us and tried to chase us.
I decide to scatter and make that guy confused
Tom succesful escape and the guy tried to chase me. I saw a light in the corner and finaly I find sun light but ...
That is a deadlock, I could go anywhere I heard the guy very close. I saw at down and there is a lake. that is the only way to escape and jump into the lake.
" byyuuurr  ..."
 I jump and I saw the guy searched me. I tried to hold the breath under the water for a long time until I felt i couldn't breath anymore. I felt so limp.
I felt somebody shake my body when I tried to open my eyes I saw uncle Dot, Tom, Anabeth and Geranld.
" You slept like a death". said uncle Dot
and I realize that was a dream